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Old Dog By:Alise M.

This is a story about a dad & his daughter as you read you will learn if I've told you about my dad It will be exactly like my dad and I!

The characters are Blake& Alise,Blake has black short hair and tan skin, he's athletic, smart, fun, and in the inside he has a sensitive heart & has adult "ADD",and Alise on the other hand she always (not really) takes her dads advice, doesn't use her intelligence enough, has a lot of argument's in her , and lastly attitude!

Alise and her dad ( Blake) were going to the mall and while they were trying to find a parking spot Alise was getting frustrated because it was near the holidays. In the mall the halls it was CROWDED because all the Christmas things in the hall. when Alise turned around her dad was acting like a hillbilly by pulling up his pants so high you could see his ankles, and all the things a dad would do to a daughter. As they got home from dropping off her friends they got into a little argument this is some of it: "Dad!!!! Why do you have to be such a dork!!!" "Do I embrace a lot!? " YES!!!!", after that she got grounded so to make it worse she slammed her door behind her. A few week's later she got another chance to go to the mall, the same thing happened again and this time she was abandoned from the mall and even if there was a friends birthday party she had to say no automatically. She hated her dad's rules, so she snook out of her bedroom window and went to the mall to hang out with some friends and go shopping for girl stuff ,( no fence boys ).While they were telling Alise that she shouldn't of snook out her dad was in the mall to in the same area as they were. So Alise hid behind a big card board picture of a daughter sneaking away from her dad and as she was talking to her friends Blake came and looked not expecting Alise (his little sweet angle) behind there but she was! When they went home as Blake was disappointed in her and she's mad at him for embarrassing her in front of her friends at the mall. They both went into her room and Blake was giving her some old school advice they use to use in the days far back.....__**"BORING**__!"Alise thought to herself.She said "Dad I want to tell you that I don't take your advice because it's old stuff and I take new advice not .....OLD" so she decides that he's just an oldie and doesn't know the new style these days. He came in the room the next day and told her the same thing again but, she still doesn't listen! So she told him the new a advice dads would give their daughters these days but he doesn't listen. A few days later she took his advice and never got in trouble again( not true)!