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McDonalds The Reasons Why They Should close down in the U.S By: Rachael Parker

I think McDonalds should close down in the U.S because most of the people are becoming obese because of eating mcdonalds to much.

Some of the things on McDonalds value menu are not that nutitional. But on the comercials they say everthing is made of high quality food grade meat .Some of the stuff on the menu nobody should be eating.

I did a sevie my class and most of them said yes on the servie .The reasults on the sevie said 16 on yes, and 13 on no. That is why I think McDonalds should close down in the U.S.

Rachael, You have a great start! You have a strong opinion about something that has been recently in the news. Definitely keep what you have, but please add some more facts to go with your opinion... for instance, if the commercials say that the food is "high quality", go to the McDonalds website and get some facts about the nutrition that show the high amount of calories and trans fat. You are well on your way, I'm just looking for a more to make it stronger.

Love, Mrs. McKone