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=Warriors Book 2: Fire and Ice =

Due Friday,January 29
= Fireheart reminds me of Sarah Revere from The Secret of Sarah Revere because they are both brave, not-afraid-to-say-what-needs-to-be-said-and-done kind of people. (Well, in Fireheart`s case, a kind of cat.) Fireheart always stood up for Graystripe, Silverstream, Ravenpaw and Cloudkit, always to Bluestar or Tigerclaw. Sarah stood up for Doctor Warren when Debby started talking about him. Fireheart tried to stop Cinderpaw from going in Bluestar`s place to meet Tigerclaw by the ThunderPath resulting in Cinderpaw`s injury. Sarah`s suspicion only growing when she catches Rachel helping a British soldier escape. =

Amelia, Nice job. I can clearly see where you gave evidence of what Sarah does to prove that she is brave, and what Fireheart did to show he (or she?) was brave. I would recommend next time adding more evidence and explanations to strengthen your response. c- 3- r- 2+ w- 20/20