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Lucky Break By:Alise
===Based on the story I'm reading in the future flan will get back with her boyfriend Alex because they have been together since the beginning of the first year in high school and has always been happily together since. why I think this will happen is because Flan is a weak girl and she can never get something off her mind once it's stuck in her mind. She takes a long journey to 3-4 country's in the states to get it off her mind, she couldn't go to France with her friends so she goes to Italy with her parents. She wasn't getting the problem off her mind so she went to Japan to see her sister, while she was there she talked to a yoga constructor as we would call it, he talks to her and gives her this charm that will get the problem off her mind.It worked Until she bumped into a guy and it breaks. I don't want to ruin the book for you so I will stop hear.===

Alise, You did a good job giving examples from the text to support why Flan will get back with Alex. Do all these examples show that she does not like to be alone? What are you trying to show? Remember, this is not a book review - it is a Reader's Response, so you need to tell all the important parts. Don't worry about "ruining the book"!! c- 3 r- 3 w- 17/20 (Watch out when you need to capitalize!)

Flan reminds me of Lauren Preston because she is a fighter like flan and gets through all the hurtful pain inside of her heart and all the bad things that had happened and pushes it aside and lets the rats eat it, and so on. Lauren is also like flan because she's tough like Flan and, if you ask how Lauren can get through any thing that hurts her heart and gets over it. Do you know that saying "Cry me a river Build me a bridge and Get over it!" well, if you do thats pretty much Laurens saying and Flans saying.Thats their saying because they always forget about it the next week and act like nothing has happened last week to them and just moves on with their life like all of us do!Thats why

Alise, I really like and admire how you integrated a quote into your response. That can be a great way to really support what your saying. Excellent job. From your response, I don't know why Flan is such a fighter. To improve, you need to include specific examples that come from the text that show an example of Flan being a fighter. Great start- next time, add exact examples from the text. c- 3 r- 2+ w- 15/20 (again, capital letters!)